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Post by CrazyDave on Apr 18, 2005 18:51:51 GMT -5
THEY ATE THE PRINCIPAL??
.....are you sure they're evil? cause it seems to me, that....
hee hee hee.
Sara, you continue to amaze me with your depth and convicion within this story. Nothing could make me happier then to see you continue this masterpiece with wanton abandon. And... well, I wanna know what happens.
This is so cool! I hope the cure invovles a nasty beating! hee hee hee.... I'm so crazy!
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Post by RubberPiggy on Apr 18, 2005 18:58:22 GMT -5
Heh, thank you Dave, but alas, I cannot take all this credit. Most of the plot stuff around this whole hyena this came right from the episode. When I've been writing these episodes, I've had the DVD in my disc drive so I could keep watching the scene and taking exact lines. So I hope it's my stuff that you like, because I know it's impossible to not like what the Buffy writers come up with.
My goal for this whole story is to make my writing just as funny and witty as the Buffy writing. Shall be a difficult task...
~RP~
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Just beyond your imagination...
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Post by Jinxie<3 on Apr 22, 2005 18:58:19 GMT -5
Dude, they ate the principal! That's freaking sweet.
I really like this, Sara...a whole lot (and I don't even watch Angel).
HUZZAH FANFICTION!
I love the sarcasm in this as well. Ah...beautiful! <3
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Post by RubberPiggy on Apr 23, 2005 11:00:05 GMT -5
Oh, thank you, Laura! I'm so glad to see someone else read my story. And I especially appreciate feedback by someone who doesn't watch <i>Buffy</i> or <i>Angel</i>. Since Caitlyn got too lazy. *glares*
Next chapter... is coming. I been busy. And I got chapters of some other people's stories that I promised to read first. But I need time and complete silence for that. *crazy* But I haven't forgotten.
~RP~
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Post by Winston on May 4, 2005 20:18:55 GMT -5
The best story series Ive read on this board.
And the best written.
Loving it Sara, keep going!!
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Post by RubberPiggy on May 5, 2005 20:34:05 GMT -5
Oh, thank you so much, Winston!
I'm hoping to get back into the swing of things next week and start getting chapters out again. Things have just been very... hectic... lately. Ieeeness.
~RP~
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Post by RubberPiggy on May 11, 2005 19:18:59 GMT -5
And it's finally happened! Chapter Thirteen is finally up! Hoorah! Please comment if you read it- you know I love to hear feedback. Thanks!
Chapter Fourteen coming soon!
~RP~
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Post by CrazyDave on May 11, 2005 20:10:49 GMT -5
So, she finally knows, eh?
YES SHELLY, THERE IS A SLAYER!!!
hee hee hee....
nothing really happened in this chapter for me to comment on, but I really like your interaction between the two characters. And since you made all that stuff up, It means you understand the characters really well.
Bravo, Sara, your chapter kicks ass. (No big surprise....). Even though it's mostly what I call "filler" It kept my attention and sparked my imagination.
And made me laugh a couple times too.
I'm going to re-read this whole story now. It's been to long since I've read it.
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Post by RubberPiggy on May 12, 2005 9:52:45 GMT -5
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it.
I'm always worried about doing a filler chapter, and this one was really just a lot of exposition that had to get out there, and I was trying to do it in an interesting way.
~RP~
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Post by Winston on May 13, 2005 0:23:21 GMT -5
Not my favorite chapter, I think the whole hitting her light a freight train scene could have been either done better, or transferred to better. But other than that it was great!
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Post by RubberPiggy on May 13, 2005 5:17:26 GMT -5
Thanks, Winsto.
Yeah, I know what you mean. It was hard. Once I finally started writing this chapter it still took me longer to write than prolly any other. I knew it wasn't done the best it could be, but I had already rewritten it a few times, and I didn't know how to fix it any more.
~RP~
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Post by fescesthrower on May 26, 2005 8:24:19 GMT -5
ooh! intrigued. . . i know what happens, but not how it's played out.
yay! good job! intrigue = interest = good.
(speech bad - just took english final)
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Post by RubberPiggy on May 26, 2005 9:51:34 GMT -5
Thanks, Al.
And yes, the English final sucked more than all the suckiest sucks that ever sucked.
~RP~
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Post by RubberPiggy on Jun 3, 2005 17:22:30 GMT -5
Chapter Fourteen is finally out! It's a bit of a shortie, but it's finally out. Hopefully, now, I'll continue to keep getting chapters done. Hopefully.
If you read it, please give feedback! Writing is hard work, so if one has any opinion, knowing it is nice.
Thanks!
Chapter Fifteen coming soon.
~RP~
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Post by Winston on Jun 3, 2005 17:48:00 GMT -5
It IS short, and lacks much of substance, but again, I love it.
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