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Post by RubberPiggy on Sept 13, 2005 14:11:48 GMT -5
Well, hey have some faith in me. I know that characters develop... *shify eyes again* And I can't wait to be devolping this one... 'cause it's gonna be cool...
In my opinion, anyway, lol.
~RP~
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Post by RubberPiggy on Nov 12, 2005 22:42:52 GMT -5
Hey, anybody remember this story, lol?
Well, if you do...
CHAPTER TWENTY IS FINALLY UP!
Hooray!
I wrote this chapter over, like, three or four days, weeks apart, so it didn't turn out as well as I hoped it would, but hopefully you'll like it okay anyway. Please leave comments- me likes to get them. And hopefully the writing bug will stay with me a while this time.
Chapter Twenty-one hopefully coming soon!
~RP~
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Post by Winston on Nov 13, 2005 21:32:50 GMT -5
Awesome stuff. I cant wait for some real plot though!
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Post by RubberPiggy on Nov 13, 2005 22:13:14 GMT -5
Thanks, Winsto!
And I'll be honest with you- we've got a little while before anything else super-important happens. Hopefully the stuff that happens until then will be entertaining, tho. Shelly's life stays pretty constant for while, but it works its way up, becoming more exciting. And I cannot wait until I get to some of these parts to write this stuff...
~RP~
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Post by RubberPiggy on Nov 14, 2005 22:29:51 GMT -5
CAN YOU BELIEVE IT!?
Chapter Twenty-One is UP!
I admit- a good half of the diologue isn't mine, and this is the beginning of an episode involving computers in 1997 that they did very poorly on the show, so it might end up being hard for me to make it sound good, but I was pretty happy with the way this chapter turned out.
So please read, and please comment! Thank you!
Chapter Twenty-Two coming soon!
~RP~
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Post by Winston on Nov 15, 2005 12:03:55 GMT -5
Good stuff, but again, Im kinda on the edge waiting for an event, something to happen, something to push the story along, anything!
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Post by RubberPiggy on Nov 15, 2005 13:46:13 GMT -5
Thanks, Winsto!
And yeah, I know. I hadn't really realized that it was gonna come out all "nothing's happening" like this. I see now that the reason an episode can be forty-five minutes, is because every character isn't in every scene- therefore it's hard to tell an episode-like story every few chapters when the character telling the story can't reasonably be in the whole story, if that makes sense. I've got some stuff planned for this one that'll hopefully make that work a little better, so we'll see how that goes.
~RP~
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