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Post by CrazyDave on Apr 4, 2005 16:46:44 GMT -5
luuuuuuurk!
hee hee hee....
But seriously, chocolate pop-tarts are God. I understand completely.
I really like how your story is going, Sara. It's starting slow, as it should, but I can feel the growth comming in a sixth sence kind of way.
I can't wait till Shelly is out there, running like a flaming cat from evil Vampires.
plus, it's kinda cool to see Shellys reactions to Angel. Everyone else (from what I remember) Always trends on eggshells around him, but Shelly doesn't. Kinda makes her really really cool.
I can't wait for more. Because Shelly is my Sunshine!
Hee hee hee. I <3 Shelly's Story!
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Post by RubberPiggy on Apr 4, 2005 17:23:05 GMT -5
Heehee! ;D Thanks, Dave!
One of the things I knew I had to think about is what kind of relationship Shelly would have with each character. And I wanted to see Shelly have something with Angel that none of the other characters ever did: a friendship. So yeah, more Shelly/Angel scenes in the works.
Coming up next is when an episode of Buffy starring Xander happens. (Super bonus points to anyone who can tell me which one! There are clues in the story, and I think I may have even said at one point in this topic what episode chapters four-six were in.) Much fun is to come!
~RP~
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Post by RubberPiggy on Apr 5, 2005 16:24:14 GMT -5
Chapter Eight is up! Feedback so appreciated!
Chapter Nine, coming soon!
~RP~
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Post by CrazyDave on Apr 5, 2005 19:23:50 GMT -5
Xanders in Trouble!!!
hee hee hee!
I like! But unfortunitly, I am out of thing to talk about....
So.... Write more faster please!!
I think I remember Lance... he's the guy who eventually tries to kill himself, right? On roof with a sniper-gun thing?
Well, it sounds like something he would do....
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Post by RubberPiggy on Apr 5, 2005 19:38:40 GMT -5
Thanks, Dave.
And no, that was Jonathan.
OMG, I got two chapters up in two days! How much faster could I write? Ieeee! ;D
~RP~
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Post by RubberPiggy on Apr 9, 2005 14:45:29 GMT -5
Chapter Nine is up! R&R pleeez!
Chapter Ten coming soon!
~RP~
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Post by RubberPiggy on Apr 9, 2005 23:58:26 GMT -5
I must post the praise, because it boosts my self-esteem to see it:
PeatearGriffan: you've gotten much better PeatearGriffan: much mmuch better RubberPiggy333: whee! thanks! RubberPiggy333: these last two chapters came from the episode. What did you think of them in particular? PeatearGriffan: very good PeatearGriffan: really, getting the characters down is good PeatearGriffan: But Willow kind of seems oblivious to Shelly's presence, is the only thing RubberPiggy333: yeah, I know what you mean. It was just hard to write for her, I guess. Shelly met Xander first, so she feels closest to him and talks to him most, and then there's no question that Buffy is just more outgoing than Willow, so that makes it weird PeatearGriffan: it's ok tho PeatearGriffan: just, maybe a one on one encounter could fix that RubberPiggy333: yeah, good idea PeatearGriffan: oh, and did you call red head willow a burnette somewhere in there? RubberPiggy333: there's actually some coming up. PeatearGriffan: cause i kept thinking it might've been Cordelia RubberPiggy333: she was a brunet in the first season PeatearGriffan: she was? oh RubberPiggy333: yup. crazy, right?
Thanks again, Alex!
~RP~
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Post by CrazyDave on Apr 10, 2005 18:04:50 GMT -5
OH!!!
Suspence! Intregue! Uh.... Intre-spence?
Anyway.... This is so cool! Things aren't what they seem, are they? Hee hee hee....
Xander, what's wrong with you?
Also, I gotta agree with Alex. The willow-Shelly and Buffy-Shelly relations are presently weak.
Of course, with the new situation with... uh.... Phsyco Xander, will give them the opening they need.
So, I wanna see more!
This is a great story, and I can't wait to read more!
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Post by RubberPiggy on Apr 10, 2005 18:52:47 GMT -5
Thanks, Dave!
And yeah, I totally get that. And there is some Shelly/Willow time in the works here. As of right now, Willow's a bit too occupied wondering what's going on with Xander, but that doesn't mean Shelly's not noticing her concern.
Chapter Ten up tomorrow, perhaps.
~RP~
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Post by RubberPiggy on Apr 11, 2005 21:10:26 GMT -5
UPDATE: Chapter Ten WILL be up tomorrow morning, before I go to skool.
~RP~
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Post by RubberPiggy on Apr 12, 2005 5:22:52 GMT -5
Chapter Ten is up. Please comment.
Chapter Eleven coming soon.
~RP~
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Post by CrazyDave on Apr 12, 2005 15:24:36 GMT -5
interesting.....
Hm....
Is Xander a hyena? Just a guess....
Hee hee hee.... hope I don't spoil it for the others. But most likely, I'm the last person to realize it, or something.
*sigh*
Oh, well. Sara Rocks. Shelly Rocks. This story rocks. And I am now offically behind Sara on chapters writen.
I bow to you, speed writer of the gods.
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Post by RubberPiggy on Apr 12, 2005 15:51:15 GMT -5
Heh, thanks, Dave.
And seriously, anyone who's seen the episode knows exactly what's up with Xander. So then if that makes it less entertaining, sue me, but as far as I'm concerned, it's more about Shelly's journey than the plot of the episodes. Or whatever.
Heh, well, if I start writing a chapter, pretty much nothing is going to stop me from finishing it the same day, except maybe a lack of internet connection on a skool night. 'Cause of the fun!
~RP~
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Post by RubberPiggy on Apr 16, 2005 18:35:06 GMT -5
Chapter Eleven is up! Please comment!
Chapter Twelve is a longer one, but it's almost done, so it'll be up real soon, possibly tonight! Yay!
~RP~
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Post by RubberPiggy on Apr 16, 2005 23:22:02 GMT -5
And Chapter Twelve is up! I knew I could do it! Comments much much apprecialted!
Remember when you go to read it, go back to the beginning of Chapter Eleven, because I added two chapters today.
Pages: 30 Paragraphs: 446 Words: 10,167
Chapter Thirteen coming soon.
~RP~
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