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Post by CrazyDave on Apr 25, 2005 7:59:41 GMT -5
You guys are the best. Thank you so much for your positive words.
The story is going to be getting rather dark starting now. In fact, there will probably be some points that'll make you very.... angry that I put them in.
Even more importently, this short story is now planned out until the end of this...
Then maybe I'll start tackling the Prequel (if we ever finish D & D.... Damn faction bitches....)
So I think there will be around... three or four more chapters, depending about how they end up after I write them.
Gods, your all going to hate me...
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Post by RubberPiggy on Apr 25, 2005 9:58:27 GMT -5
Only three or four more chapters? Awwwwww, so short. Dissapointed already.  
I won't be mad at you for sadness and darkness in the plot. Only if the plot sucks. Which it won't because you rock. 
~RP~
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Post by CrazyDave on Apr 30, 2005 20:14:02 GMT -5
Ok, it's update time!!!!!
W00t!
um, I'm looking at an update of All That Remains either tonight late (like around midnight or early tomarrow) or early tomarrow morning.
And then, I hope to write most of the next chapter quickly too. Because then next one and the one after that will be rather quick.
and also, after the next two chapters, anyone who has been following this story will, without a doubt, hate me with violent...uh.... hatred.
Pretty much, ya'll are going to hate me!
w00t!
I just can't wait!!!! this is going to rock!!!!
Projected time of Update: 5-1 at 12:00 am
(All delays will be reported)
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Post by CrazyDave on Apr 30, 2005 23:44:46 GMT -5
Actually, this is taking longer than I thought (cause I'm adding a bunch of funny stuff) so look for it early tomarrow or at like three A.M. tonight....
If... any of you are still awake....
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Post by CrazyDave on May 1, 2005 0:21:49 GMT -5
Wai! Wai!
This is the moment! This is the Time! This is Chapter Twelve in all it's glory!
And nothing will be the same again!!!!!
Pages: 58 (this one chapter is six pages!)
Words: 14,987
Chapters: 12
Paragraphs: 890
Lines: 2,270
Reviews: 9; Rubberpiggy: 7, Jinx: 2
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Post by RubberPiggy on May 1, 2005 1:18:49 GMT -5
Gah, the fact that I am not awake enough to read this now is TORTURING me. FIRST thing tomorrow morning... or later this morning. Ieee...
~RP~
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Post by RubberPiggy on May 1, 2005 9:32:40 GMT -5
Whoo, amazing! It was so long, but it ended so fast. I'm not angry yet, who knows if I ever will be, but I just CAN'T WAIT to find out what happens next. Loved to see anoter 'FLAME.' Also nice to see Risa finally mentioned again. It seems like everything's about to come together, and I can't wait to see it.
Keep it up, Dave! Sara loves ATR! ;D
~RP~
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Post by CrazyDave on May 1, 2005 9:56:41 GMT -5
Gee, I thought you might be pissed that Risa is evil....
oh, well, You'll be even madder by the end of the next one.
BWA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA!!!!!!
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Full Pirate Monkey
Just beyond your imagination...
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Post by Jinxie<3 on May 1, 2005 11:29:45 GMT -5
-screams and rips out hair-
Good God that needed to be longer!
I knew they would kiss...aw...IT'S LOVE! -gushes-
Or maybe it's not. Dave, you're very good at leaving us hanging, did you know that? And giving twists and turns and no one knows where you're going next.
AH! It's fantastic.
More, please!
-Jinxie<3
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Post by CrazyDave on May 1, 2005 11:46:32 GMT -5
BWA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA!!!!
personally, I think that 'Fake kissing daydream' joke is one of my best.
I love my evil!
ok, so more will be up soon, If I can.
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Post by CrazyDave on May 1, 2005 17:29:10 GMT -5
Kay, kay... ok....
The next chapter is rather short. and, on a whim today, I wrote out the ending.
So, I'm thinking... why not just finish the damn thing? It is almost done....
I'm just going to shove the last two parts together and make one big Chapy.
Also, for purpose of Dramadic effect, I will have a song link on the ending, in order to put you in the right mood for the last section. Just click on the link and it should open in whatever you use to listen to music. Then, just finish the story.
WEEE!!!! now everyone can review because.... IT's GOING TO BE FINISHED!!!!
Projected update time: May 1st, at 8:00-9:00
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Post by RubberPiggy on May 1, 2005 17:48:24 GMT -5
Oh, I suspected Risa being evil, or at least up to something, early on. But then I kinda forgot when she was gone from the story for so long. Usually as long as the plot is good, I'll never get mad at it, no matter what upsetting twists may come. Like they killed off Hughs on Fullmetal Alchemist last night. Matt was fucking pissed, but I just thought it was a great episode, even if it was sad- possibly because it was sad. If that makes any sense.
~RP~
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Post by CrazyDave on May 1, 2005 18:06:16 GMT -5
Shit.....
uh.... you know that whole....uh..... Finish by tonight thingy?
yeah, well, the link is down, so the only way I can finish tonight is if everyone IM's me and I send them the song.....
I'll be on IM now.
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Post by CrazyDave on May 1, 2005 19:09:51 GMT -5
ok, everything I've said so far?
Forget it.
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Post by RubberPiggy on May 1, 2005 19:40:01 GMT -5
Everything? EVER? Okay, fine.
So, what's this "All That Remains" thing all about??
~RP~
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