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Post by CrazyDave on Apr 4, 2005 16:35:42 GMT -5
Oh, God!
I had no Idea!
I am SO sorry Sara!!!!
Thank you for your lovely , and prompt reviews.....
Great, I'm an Asshole.....
well, I'd still like more Reviews, but what I have is more then I could have ever dreamed of.
I really am so glad that everyone likes it.
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Post by RubberPiggy on Apr 4, 2005 16:38:40 GMT -5
It's okay, Dave. You're not an asshole.
~RP~
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Post by CrazyDave on Apr 6, 2005 17:40:52 GMT -5
Ta DA!!!!!!
Chapter nine is up..... sorta!
Everyone will probably be mad about this, but I cut this chapter off early....
Hee hee hee! MY CLIFFHANGERS ARE EVIL!!!!!
BWA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA!!!!
Plz R & R!!!!!
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Post by RubberPiggy on Apr 6, 2005 18:10:43 GMT -5
Hmm... that sounds very Tetsuiga-ish... DOESN'T IT? Yes... it does.
That was soooooooo short! You're killin' me, Dave! Ieee! But good. Goooooooood. Unlocking more about Astaroc. Always fun.
~RP~
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Post by CrazyDave on Apr 11, 2005 21:23:43 GMT -5
Ok, you guys are probobly wondering "Where's All that Remains?"
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Ok, who am I kidding....
Sara, YOU MAY be wondering, "where is the new chapter of all that remains."
Great, more depression......
Look, I'm depressed. REALLY depressed. Ever since sunday I've felt like this.
I worte some A.T.R. Really. But it's crap. Total, complete, uder crap. Crap Crap Crap. I hate it.
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I'm even going so far as to consider abandoning it.....
no.... No.... I can't go that far.... Not yet anyway....
So... A.T.R. will be late. Real late. Possibly will be moved to "Hiatus" Status, Or even "Maybe Someday" Status.
Sorry
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Post by RubberPiggy on Apr 12, 2005 5:18:05 GMT -5
Don't worry about it. I love ATR, but Dave is more important. Take all the time you need. I've been to the depressed place, I know what it's like. Hope it doesn't last too long.
~RP~
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Post by CrazyDave on Apr 13, 2005 16:19:54 GMT -5
Chapter 10 is now up!!!
guess what? I NEED REVIEWS! Why? Because I NEED an actual review on my fight scene.
I wrote it when I was depressed, and so, it may suck. Suck alot. So.... someone better tell me how it turned out.
Also, I'm a jerk for the whole cliffhanger thing....
Hee hee hee.... The Japanese I put in this chapter didn't come through... but, It's ok with me. I don't mind at all. Ask me online and I show you the real stuff.
SO.... EVERYONE REVIEW THIS TIME!!!!!
PLEASE!!!!
Dave
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Post by RubberPiggy on Apr 13, 2005 16:33:05 GMT -5
WHOO! NEW ATR!!
And you just had to fix all the punctuation after I had already got done reading it, didn't you?
Anyway, the fight scene. I'm no good at writing fight scenes either, so I'll do my best here. Basically, I understood what was going on, so I think that made it good. I do think it could've been better, just if you worded a few things differently, I guess. Like, the thing that sticks in my mind is when you're talking about Astaroc's blast vs. #4's blast, and you keep saying "the blast" for both of them, that got a bit confusing. But I worked it out and knew what it mean, even with messed up punctuation. So GOOOOOOOOOD!
And you know I LOVED getting back to the humor at the end there! Oh, I'll say it again, I LOOOOVE the sense of humor of this story! Whee!
Yeah yeah, jerk for the cliffhanger, whatever. I'm used to it by now.
Can't wait to see more!
~RP~
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Post by CrazyDave on Apr 13, 2005 23:30:42 GMT -5
Thank you again Sara!
Yeah, about the humor, I'd like to think that this story is a Comedy, with romantic and violent... and angsty.... and Dramadic.... overtones.
Lots of overtones.
Thank you again!
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Post by CrazyDave on Apr 23, 2005 12:55:56 GMT -5
Luara! THOU ART MY GOD-SEND!!!!! hee hee hee, but really... I needed other reviews.... I don't know why nobody else reads it, but it makes me very sad.... But, that isn't the point! The point is YOU read, and, amazingly enough, you liked it! So Good! uhg..... but, unfortunitly, I'm not sure when I'll be updateing it again. It's crunch.... uh.... two-three weeks here at college, and I have to write a mostly filler chapter, which I am not good at. So, I'm trying some new stuff, changing somethings around, etc. We'll see where it takes me..... Planed release of Chapter 11: Sunday, April 24, at 8:00pm
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Post by RubberPiggy on Apr 23, 2005 15:07:56 GMT -5
Hey.... tomorrow at 8:00pm is Sunday, April 24, at 8:00pm!! Whee!
~RP~
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Post by CrazyDave on Apr 24, 2005 18:42:05 GMT -5
The actual story will be up at exactly 8:00.
I would apreciate a review from all who read, as this section seems much darker then usual.
well, that's how it sometimes goes.....
However, I'd like to make a happy thank you to all who will or plan to review this chapter. I really do apricate every single one of them, and if I can, I will also respond to them.
To be honest, you guys, this has been a great hobby for my to do in my free time. It feels great to be able to write something and resieve ideas, thoughts, and prasies from you I miss here at college. It makes me feel.... conected, if nothing else.
You'll notice me adding something to ALL the chapters for this time, but they will all be at the end of each chapter, so they'll be easy to find if you don't wanna read the whole thing.
Pages: 51 Words: 12,934 Chapters:11 Paragraghs: 765 Lines: 1,935 Reviews: 7; Rubberpiggy:6, Jinx:1
Thank you all.
David Hoffman
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Post by Jinxie<3 on Apr 25, 2005 5:10:41 GMT -5
Whooahh...it is a lot darker and creepier. It seems much different than the other chapters. But it ended on a high note and it was written very well. Shows that you're flexible. ^_^
See, I'm a little odd, and I have a thing for morbid/dark writing. So, that was fantastic. I love it.
How your portrayed the emperior made me hate him a whole hell of a lot.
I think you work being dark really well, Dave.
-Jinxie<3
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Post by RubberPiggy on Apr 25, 2005 5:47:59 GMT -5
Oh, Aaaaaaaastarooooooc.... I'm waaaaaiiiting for yoooouu...
Differenty chapter right here. With a very slappy emperor guy. Teehee, slapping. Sorry, it's early in the morning. But yes, twas darker. God, I wish I was sleeping. Maybe posting now wasn't the best idea. But you know I liked it, Dave. And I can't wait for next chapter now that Astaroc and Erika have been reunited, because I love the way those two characters feed off each other.
Yay for Dave!
I'm gonna go to skool and sleep through Physics now...
~RP~
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