XAevinX
Full Pirate Monkey
~siro ookami~
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Post by XAevinX on Mar 15, 2006 21:08:32 GMT -5
Due to much technical, mental, and other difficulties...we were delayed a bit. I blame sunspots... Anyway Chapter 2 is officially posted. P.S. I like the new color scheme but can't read much of Sara's green font anymore.
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Post by RubberPiggy on Mar 15, 2006 21:31:15 GMT -5
That's why I write in Purple, now!
OMG, Alex, you rock my socks.
~RP~
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Post by Angels Sleeping on Mar 15, 2006 21:46:13 GMT -5
I love how Alex's character is very schizo. 'Tis awesome job, Alex!
I'm not a fan of the noises in colons though. I'd find a way to incorporate them into the actual what's-going-one.
It can even be something like. . . "A snap!" that still interrupts his thoughts.
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Post by Winston on Mar 15, 2006 23:11:54 GMT -5
It was good, a little confusing in the middle with all the stuff going on, and all the sentence fragments, but good.
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XAevinX
Full Pirate Monkey
~siro ookami~
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Post by XAevinX on Mar 29, 2006 16:14:22 GMT -5
It is a little confusing and chaotic...but that's the idea. His character is kind of out of it.
P.S. If ya'll couldn't tell I was going through some...stuff. Anyway I feel a lot better now and that means my muse has returned! So I'm back to reading and writing on a regular basis. I'll be sending Dave his stuff tonight, which he has mostly done anway, and hopefully it will be posted by this weekend. I plan on trying to get a new chapter every week or two from now on, instead of once every three months.
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Post by CrazyDave on Apr 1, 2006 22:27:37 GMT -5
Lies!!!!
I have recieved NOTHING!!!!!!
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Post by RubberPiggy on Apr 1, 2006 23:00:37 GMT -5
Lol!!
~RP~
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paranoidagent
Full Pirate Monkey
"Figure it out, you who lack filial piety" - Rufus
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Post by paranoidagent on Aug 25, 2006 19:43:31 GMT -5
So, will anything become of our newly formed party? Damn, this is worse than waiting for manga to come out!
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Post by Winston on Aug 25, 2006 21:07:55 GMT -5
Theyll all die. Of course.
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paranoidagent
Full Pirate Monkey
"Figure it out, you who lack filial piety" - Rufus
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Post by paranoidagent on Sept 1, 2006 17:52:32 GMT -5
Suggested ending:
Before slaying the villain, our heroes attempt to go on a group-bonding trip to the snowy alps of Lemnia. But in a tragic avalanche accident, our heroes saw their demise by being frozen in time, and doomed the world with their deaths. Will an anonoymous traveler be able to thaw this 'frozen-in-time' plot? Or will our heroes forever be iced in immoblization? Find out in the sequel!
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XAevinX
Full Pirate Monkey
~siro ookami~
Posts: 488
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Post by XAevinX on Sept 9, 2006 0:07:24 GMT -5
<sigh>
For the reccord I have already talked to Dave about this. We're waiting on him. Feel free to yell at him or throw things.
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Post by Angels Sleeping on Dec 19, 2006 1:49:51 GMT -5
I wonder if we're going to be alive by the time everyone gets to write a chapter. . .
And wasn't Dave yelling at for taking too long!? I only took aa few months!
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Post by RubberPiggy on May 10, 2007 14:27:47 GMT -5
Wow, this is all pretty hilarious to read over. Nice that Dave's chapter is finally posted now, only a bit over a year after Matt initially said that it would be.
~RP~
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