XAevinX
Full Pirate Monkey
~siro ookami~
Posts: 488
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Post by XAevinX on Sept 15, 2005 16:27:05 GMT -5
It was the brief "crush his spirits so he'll write more" version.
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Post by Smileygirl918 on Sept 15, 2005 20:47:45 GMT -5
Winston you write well, but every writer goes through criticism.. . it's the only way to make your writing better.. I really do hope you write more!
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Post by Winston on Sept 15, 2005 21:35:41 GMT -5
It was the brief "crush his spirits so he'll write more" version. Haha. I write more when Im inspired, however long that may be.
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Post by Smileygirl918 on Sept 16, 2005 18:42:49 GMT -5
I sincerely hope it's soon
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Post by Winston on Sept 22, 2005 12:51:51 GMT -5
4 paragraphs into a new chapter.
Its coming, dont worry.
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Post by Winston on Nov 8, 2005 14:57:09 GMT -5
New section up. Its much shorter than the past couple, but I couldnt figure out any other way to draw out this one little event.
Read and respond peoples.
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Post by Smileygirl918 on Nov 8, 2005 21:36:34 GMT -5
I like it, but it seems like a lot of description and not that much action. Keep up the good work!
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