"My Duty" -- Discussion

[Angels Sleeping]

So. . . for those of you who haven't read this before. . . who's who? Can you tell? Lashner is Mike's brother. He's the only one who isn't on this board or wasn't at some point.

Anyway! I have the prologue and first chapter up. Reading and rewriting it online, I decided to begin writing again so you'll see the second chapter sometime in the near future.

I'm going to tell you that there will be typos. I only have a bit of time to type it online so I didn't run a check for errores.

Read and review, yo! It will be much appreciated!

[CrazyDave]

First off.... COOL!!!!

hee hee ehee, That's nearly exactly close to just about what I said that one time while I was drinking a slushie.

Very well written and inforative, although the number of names is slightly confusing. I'm sure that would clear up if you worte a little more though, so it's no big problem.

As a quick favor, can you change my Character's name from 'Dave' to 'Gilgamesh'? That's the name I'm using for Mike's game, so I want em to match.

Thanks alot!!!

And... keep writting! We need more stories in this area.....

[XAevinX]

crazydave said:

although the number of names is slightly confusing.

Well if you've spent hours playing with them all then it's not confusing at all. When I hear Raphen for example it sounds like (Mike) in my head. So I already know who they all are...if that makes sense...anyway...

Plot didn't go far yet so it's hard to get real into a disgussion. Let me just say the characters interact just like we all do and I found this to be so very amusing.